I ran an alpha test of my setting and rules for Magi. A group of players from the Fate Core community graciously played in the game. Overall we had a bit of fun.
Things that I learned
-I need to add more detail to the description of what the magi are and what the characters can do.
-The skills need to be described in far more detail. I realized that I had not explained that the skills cover both magical and mundane actions.
-The world building needs a lot more work. A lot. Seriously.
-I get very easily confused as to how to build a narrative and tension in this setting. I need more specificity. I think I should take a look at how Apocalypse World and steal a couple a bits from it.
Here is a recording of the game should you wish to watch how it went:
I was one of the players, and I had a fun time playing. I do pretty much agree with your assessment of how the game went. It did seem very much like a new game being taken on its maiden voyage, which is pretty much what it was. I still believe it's not a bad game, and could really blossom.
ReplyDeleteInstead of narration, learn how to effectively describe.
ReplyDeleteDo you have a specific example or examples of where I failed? I am uncertain how to fix a problem if I cannot see it. What do you mean by "effectively Describe?" I would love to take you criticism and use it,but it is a bit vague. Clarify please.
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